second draft of my documentary

Feedback from my documentary draft two

For my second draft, I took the time to include the feedback from draft one by including more structure and different music-making a more accurate representation of my interviewees. My teacher suggested a more voice of god-like narration with the idea of the voice being a male's. I therefore will hold auditions for my voice of god narration, including two boys and two girls. I will take out more captions and include my voice-overs as they engage more audiences keeping them more entertained.