My magazine critics and how i changed them

 

For my magazine article, I was given feedback by my teacher which I made the changes to now. I feel like I have completed it now and am ready to send it off. 

The critics have helped me improve my magazine cover in order to get the best grade I can,  my teacher gave me time in the lesson to reflect on the changes and also gave me time to change them in order to improve. 

I made a title for my documentary, a new title tag and also tried to fit and find a bubble quote that I was able to fit in, my teacher gave me ideas on this part which I ended up using for my final 'bubble quote'.